Lovingly written by rose - Wattpad
If you like wattpad stories, you’ll love this. An 18 year old virgin gets sold to a 40 year old man by her boyfriend. The sex trafficking and the 22 year age gap wasn’t sexy to me, so I didn’t finish it.
Bumbleborder - 3.5 stars. Better than Ms. Dee’s other books
Cassandra Dee partners up with Kendall Blake and produces a better book than the few I’ve recently read, so I’m proud of her! Better characters, better character development, better plot development, and even better understanding of BDSM without making this book sound like a sexual guide into BSDM 101, thank you so very much!
(Warning! Spoilers ahead!)
Daisy is a meek and placid virgin who is the daughter of an alcoholic father and a drug-seeking mother who had overdosed a year prior to the story’s start. Her boyfriend-only-in-name pimps her to his rather twisted bastard of a boss (but with a cold but possibly golden heart) who is fascinated by the purity shining from her when the sniveling brat shows his employer a smartphone picture of her. Brick (which is a weird name for starters) who is a BSDM dom offers the jerk $300K for just one month’s time with his girlfriend with the full intention of training her to his liking, have his fun, then dump her back onto his employee to deal with the consequences, but life shifts a bit. Never one for a real relationship, he finds himself wanting something more permanent from her. She’s not sure what she wants other than, perhaps, some control over her life at the very end of the tale.
I far more enjoyed her main characters in this story than in previous books I’ve read by Cassandra Dee. (I haven’t read anything by Kendall Blake, but this person appears to have been a better influence on Ms. Dee. I will need to look more into this writer in the future!) It is better in the editing department but not at the level I’m used to. I found the story lines to be less template and followed a more realistic point of view which didn’t disturb my suspension of my disbelief. That was a huge factor in my liking this book. Better fleshing out but still lacking a bit.
Brick deals with the weasel of the boyfriend in the end. Instead of trampling all over Daisy while she’s attempting to gain more control over her life and grow up for realsies. That was unexpected but a totally realistic move. That sold me more on this storyline than in other works by Ms. Dee.
I doubt I would have spent as much money on their books in the future. The page count didn’t warrant that kind of price in my book. It isn’t available on KU, and I have yet seen it as a give-away in any of the downloadable sites.